The power of praise!

09 Mar 2009

·Wega

This day that I lie helpless on the ground With these eyes searching the inviting sky But my dear soul to this ground is bound Nevertheless my soul remains a free spy Of the one superior He who looks over them; The beings I do so respect and ones I drear Even with the ones I lonely loved then; Who used to my heart, be very much dear They looked at me in despair and in pain As I started the powerful melodious hum And leapt on my toes to praise and drench in rain With my song that began mostly with a mum That we praise in the times of trying acts And we shout when the tries get bigger pants. I m learningsonnet, all critics are welcome about the form and the overal poem.

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I thirst the art of word painting, just in love. it came to me and now i wish to make it perfect, and i hope to marry my loving poetry till ... do us part:)

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