Things Long Past

I found this poem in my document folder that i have written some time ago. It seems better as a song perhaps with the repitition and it seems more lyrical. Not sure as to what i shoud post it, so i will leave it on Generic for now. Let me know what you think. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________ Upon a darkened sky the heavens fall Did you really think I’ll let you have it all? So was she worth it, was she worth it? Do you have your candles lit? And then it all falls down here And you make me wish that I’d disappear And I cry today, but it’s over now And I know I have to move on and bow To the things long past to me now And I fall down here now And you make me wish I’d disappear Look at the sky today Was it my song I heard you play? Was it those words you said, I heard? And I feel myself falling to the dirt And then it all falls down here And you make me wish that I’d disappear And I cry today, but it’s over now And I know I have to move on and bow To the things long past to me now And I fall down here now And you make me wish I’d disappear And now I see you bleeding It’s all so damn misleading Can you see now as you look upon this darkened sky? That all you had was more then enough, but you had to fly And now you cry today, but it’s over now And you know you have to move on and bow To the things long past to you now And you fall down here now And I make you wish you’d disappear And now I cry And it’s over And I fall down there Now I am gone I disappeared