Train

04 Jan 2010

·Flutter Girl

edited and re-organised to read the wayI thought it LoL..I want to leave it reading as a continuous train of thought..hence the title (you come up with something better!) skin growing to the toilet full of shit ready to flush all your common sense down the drain into the sewer where the dirty rats hide in their suits and ties they congregate to plot your demise using your fear to make you huddle like a flock of sheep running from the dog so much power in a single bite punish one and the rest will follow like blind mice who can't find the food they should swallow they eat the poison off the silver dropping like seven lashed with the leather packed in jars and sold to China making room for the roaches to grow three hundred pounds top of the food chain spread their disease like a plague to cleanse the land with their good mind closed the ignorant flee before nailed to the tree together they bleed the dissenter and its leaves few drink the knowledge from the resin re-learning history's lesson

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Flutter Girl

I've only a handful of poems, and all are generally short..would you please take a moment to have a look and tell me what I can do to improve? I am the Chairperson and founder of the Opre Foundation. I am also on the Board of Directors for...

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