Try As I Might.
I toe the line but always trip You turn your head to watch me slip Another hand slaps my face All my achievements have beenerased. A hundred triumphs pass you by Ipull up my socks and cement my smile My sweat and blood is lost on you As you frown at the scuff on my shoe. ---- Thanks for all of the feedback so far! Critics are always welcome - there is always room for improvement and another perspective. I have tweaked it a little. p.s Thanks for pointing out the spelling mistake -I had completely missed that *oops*
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