"Unbearable Pain"

16 Aug 2010

·Dave

The pain I feel is unbearable Negative thoughts marching in my head before I go to bed You said you wouldn't lie was I just mislead? I trusted you and thought you trusted me Why would you do this you could of set me free Instead I was used untill nothing was left... And then you still obtained my very last breath I still stuck around anticipating for the best But I was stabbed numerious times in my left chest The pain I feel is unbearable.

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Dave

Started writing in early Aug. of 2010 I was never into it but my GF writes and I was interested and picked up a pen and here we are. Of course I know my stuff isn't great but I put alot of feeling and real life experiance so I would appreciate...

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