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I really need a title for this.. suggestions? Your words; they devoured me like a knife Slit through my soul and stole my life You watched me bleed as you impaled my heart, Grinned in pleasure while you ripped it apart You watched the pieces fall and shatter All of my trust, to you, didn't matter My love, my hope, my insecurity My low self-confidence, my low self-esteem All poured right into you, for you were my escape For when I was with you, I was warm; I was safe You took advantage of that; you knew I wouldn't leave you You knew I'd come back, you knew I couldn't leave you You knew how much I loved you, you knew how much I needed you.. You hurt and betrayed me, Captured and enslaved me You led me to believe that things were right; That you would protect me; you would rid of all spite Now I lie on the floor, my heart beside me, pulverized My limp body sprawled, numb, paralyzed Everything slowly fades, my vision is leaving, turning black My last memories consist of your smile, your laugh The look on your face when you said that you loved me As opposed to the look I saw on you while you hurt me Despite it all; despite how much you hurt me Your love still provides warmth; you still mean everything to me.. I've had people judge my poem by taking my age into account. Please don't do that. I'm asking for your opinion on my poem, not my personal life. Thanks.
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