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14 Sep 2009

·menoh

I need help in a title for this one, I am kinda stuck...I also feel like it is incomplete...like maybe another verse or so? What do you think? You vile creation, You who caused me Greatest pain, Greatest sadness, Now absent, Long removed. Was you, Love, With the brightest delight, Transformed into Heartache, Now even pain Is a treasured request Over emptiness. You once-loathed, I chased too far, Yet so close you shine In others’ hearts, But not a glance To mine eye As I traded you For lust.

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I am a button pusher. I stir up trouble. It is what I do. I live in the borders between light and dark. I can write about beautiful things, and joy and love, but I find I am more creative when i write about the dark. I love to hold a mirror up to the...

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