Up in Smoke

05 Apr 2023

·Bluejay

Swifts call as they dive among abandoned smokestacks in dusky autumn, workmen and heat are long gone, cold as your smile when you left. *Note: In case anyone doesn't recognize it, the style is actually tanka, haiku's big brother.

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