Vapor Trails.

Here, this music sorta goes with the poem, it helped inspire me, its the 3rd song down> http://www.playlist.com/searchbeta/tracks#another%20version%20of%20the%20truth I tried to post this before but some weird thing happened with the site when I tried to edit so unfortunatly I had to repost it. Its meant to be read very slowly, I was focusing mainly on afeel and a certain color and ambiance,not so muchrhythm or anything. Id like to know what you feel mostly.All inputs apreciated though. Vapor Trails. Immersed in zero patters Fingers, feel,can still remember Shaded wet blacktop Beneath a steel sky And the disturbingsound of roses Like tiny falling birds "You been sleeping in the wind again?" "Been blowing smoke in the shadows?" There were dead leaves, and a smell... Cold steam and distant mornings There wasso much to love... That much can be lost to us Pitter patter goes a memory Aching whispers in the dark "I.. think I.. loved.. you." All that'slosthas beentaken Stolen awayforever Sorun on home now Swallow your little pills Sweat yourfamiliar fears Hold close what isdear to you Pray with your beating heart the absurdities.. "Stop stirring the ashes in my attic." Ayca's poem from"The Disassemblers"