Wolf Hunt

16 Aug 2010

·LoriNichols

They say the hunt is just for sport Except for the thrill of the guns report To kill the Pack - the ultimate goal May god have mercy upon their soul I could show you pictures of blood and gore wishing for a way to even the score I will not do that - it's not my way You'll get my point by what I say We punish people who harm their pets Spending thousands of dollars at the local vets But when it comes to wolvesthey don't care Throwing poison gas into their lair Hunters hide in the belly of planes Rejoicing the fact that wolves will be slain They chase them down until they lose their fight Then murder them ruthlessly - it's just not right! Open your eyes and take a look At the atrocities that would fill a book Knowledge is needed to end the futility Of all the cruel, inhuman stupidity. A little help with this one please. It took me a long time to finish it and I'm still not "happy" with it. Any suggestions?

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LoriNichols

I am a new poet that is looking for some constructive criticism. I don't write traditional love poems and I'm not very good at visual imagery. Some of the poetry can be a little on the dark side. I write for pleasure and I have been known to write...

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