young again

28 Jan 2010

·moonqueen

she took off her blue silk panties and let her gown fall onto the floor. steamdrifted up around her face to caress her skin with a scented moisture. she thought of the man waiting for her, his promises made her feel young again. he told her he thinks she is beautiful, and touched her as if it were true, fingers healed her soul and mind. soft lips caused such tremors she'dscreamed out loud.she had never felt so alive and she knewhe was worth her cash. © tlp 2010 o The Etheree consists of 10 lines of 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10 syllables for a total of 55 syllables. o The first line is a monosyllabic word; the second line has two syllables, and so on, until the tenth line with ten syllables. o The most important elements of this format are the Etheree structure, coherence (pulling ideas together to create acomplete thought) and focusing on imagery. o Etheree can also be reversed and written 10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1. Get creative and write an Etheree with more than one verse, but follow suit with an inverted syllable count. o Reversed Etheree: 10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1 o Double Etheree: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 10, 9, 8, 7, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

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